Saturday, December 11, 2010

illusion

Those lucid moments of her madness,
and accumulated inquisitive of mine,
adverted towards that real calmness,
the betimes of serenitical metallic sign.

Ambiguity was measurably over.
it was essence of the dulcet gist,
as the initiatory by goodish sower,
through that sweet innocent bliss.

4 comments:

  1. full of optimism and a sound sense of the abstract .. i got the intent for the write up my friend .. but somehow i found the language used too high for me to grab the deeper meaning .. i need to take some lessons from u bhaiji :D

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  2. full of optimism and a sound sense of abstract ..i got the intent behind the writeup .. but somehow the words used were a bit too high for my dumb understanding .. i need to take lesson from u in vocabulary my friend .. :D

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  4. Thank you Madhur Sir!I really feel encouraged when I receive such humble blessings from people like you they who respect words!

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